Friday, 10 September 2010
Broken Chain - Thinking Critically
In the story Alfonso is a shy teenager that tried to impress a girl on his first date. In some ways his action is somehow similar to other boys/girls on their first date. In another words, all teenagers want to have a perfect school life. Alfonso is a shy boy but he still want to look good on his first date and maybe even start an relationship. Same for girls, they may also be shy but they all want to be gorgeous on their first date, they definitely want to have a boy friend, too. In the story Alfonso didn't have a function-able bicycle for him to ride around on, and his brother didn't really want to borrow Alfonso his. Finally Alfonso's bicycle finally collapsed, what Alfonso really want in that moment is a fully functioned bicycle, and I bet a lot of kids have the same dream similar to that (like me).
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Hantine,
ReplyDeleteThis is okay, but too short. You should always try to write at least 200 words. If you continue to write short entries, then I will have to start reducing your points.
-MM